Jan 15
Did Miss Teen South Carolina Get A Job With Al Edwards?

This statement from the Al Edwards campaign needs a 7th grade English teacher to diagram it for me.

AL EDWARDS CAMPAIGN ANNOUNCEMENT CHALLENGING BORRIS MILES I am running for State Representative of District 146 again because I understand that redistricting will have a dramatic event on all of us. I know we need a strong Democrat to keep a Republican from controlling District 146. I want to help save and preserve TSU, Texas History more importantly Emancipation-JUNETEENTH and all of Texas culture. I am that unbiased individual who is willing to fight for the betterment of all citizens, especially for the improvement of our educational system.

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PinkDome at 5:56 AM
 
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Unfortunately, I see this type of writing every day. Doesn't make it that much better, but what I am seeing comes from 11th and 12th graders.

CY at January 15, 2008 1:50 PM

... and like such as....

drinks_at_the_stephen_f at January 16, 2008 11:19 AM

11th and 12th graders? I see this type of writing coming out of state agency memos. Typically, those memos are written by... can you believe it?... overeducated staff attorneys.

Kimmy at January 16, 2008 11:29 AM
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